Great work! You always have creative ideas about writing. If I need to say something about your writing, I would add a contrast word "But" before the last sentence " I think that tigers are cute" because you have a different opinion from others.
Great work! You always have creative ideas about writing. If I need to say something about your writing, I would add a contrast word "But" before the last sentence " I think that tigers are cute" because you have a different opinion from others.
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